Writing Challenge: Shadow

Here’s a poem that I think fits, however not perfectly, the writing challenge offered on poet Adele Kenny’s blog, The Music In It. Adele asks her readers to write a shadow poem. If you’re interested, follow this link to Adele’s challenge.

This is one of the first poems in my developing manuscript, The Journals of Lt. Arthur Kendal Everly: Poems of the American Civil War. In it, Everly, a teacher, fears that war is imminent.

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This is the Place

April 1, 1861

Here, beneath these trees –
oak and ash – shadows lay
like blankets spread
for a community of picnics.
I feast on a moment’s song:

breezes, still laced
with March’s chill, weave
as ribbons about these limbs,
Giggling children dart
behind stalwart trunks

hiding from each other and me –
children teasing me, their teacher,
as I walked to school.

But this spring rumbles.
Men who drape themselves
in the dark robes of politics

brandish words as warriors
brandish swords –
and I am afraid.

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9 Responses to Writing Challenge: Shadow

  1. I have nominated you for the Liebster Award. Since nomination and awarding seem to be, in this context, identical, I could just as easily say I’ve given you the Liebster Award. Okay, I’ll say it. You got it.
    Check it out here. http://teepee12.wordpress.com/2012/08/22/liebster-blog-award/ You deserve it.

  2. I have nominated and thus also awarded you the Liebster Blogging Award. You deserve, I am happy to be in a position to bestow it. Check it out here:\

    http://teepee12.wordpress.com/2012/08/22/liebster-blog-award/

    Getting awards IS fun, isn’t it?

  3. You are totally welcome.

  4. I love the “robes of politics.”

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