Here’s a poem that I think fits, however not perfectly, the writing challenge offered on poet Adele Kenny’s blog, The Music In It. Adele asks her readers to write a shadow poem. If you’re interested, follow this link to Adele’s challenge.
This is one of the first poems in my developing manuscript, The Journals of Lt. Arthur Kendal Everly: Poems of the American Civil War. In it, Everly, a teacher, fears that war is imminent.
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This is the Place
April 1, 1861
Here, beneath these trees –
oak and ash – shadows lay
like blankets spread
for a community of picnics.
I feast on a moment’s song:
breezes, still laced
with March’s chill, weave
as ribbons about these limbs,
Giggling children dart
behind stalwart trunks
hiding from each other and me –
children teasing me, their teacher,
as I walked to school.
But this spring rumbles.
Men who drape themselves
in the dark robes of politics
brandish words as warriors
brandish swords –
and I am afraid.




































I have nominated you for the Liebster Award. Since nomination and awarding seem to be, in this context, identical, I could just as easily say I’ve given you the Liebster Award. Okay, I’ll say it. You got it.
Check it out here. http://teepee12.wordpress.com/2012/08/22/liebster-blog-award/ You deserve it.
Thank you and thank you. I am honored. I’ll check out the link you provided. Thanks again.
I have nominated and thus also awarded you the Liebster Blogging Award. You deserve, I am happy to be in a position to bestow it. Check it out here:\
http://teepee12.wordpress.com/2012/08/22/liebster-blog-award/
Getting awards IS fun, isn’t it?
Thank you. I am honored. All the best.
You are totally welcome.
I love the “robes of politics.”
Thank you. I believe you are an Anaphora author? I am too. All the best.
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